Talk:HMS Magpie (1826)/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:29, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:29, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
- Image appropriately licensed
- Suggest rephrasing the lede to state that she was the lead or name ship of her class.
- Done.
- Suggest that you tell the reader that the guns were smoothbores in the infobox and main body
- Added the link as at Beaulieu
- Replace the link to long gun with the link for naval long gun
- Done.
@Sturmvogel 66: Hi, thanks for this and your other reviews. See if my actions are satisfactory. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 19:47, 29 February 2024 (UTC)