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Past tense[edit]

With MonaVie being a completely defunct company, shouldn't all instances of present tense in this article be switched to past tense? I made one such edit in the lead, but I've noticed quite a few more issues and it seems like tense should be corrected throughout. I am happy to sweep through the article and make the edits myself, but I wanted to make sure this is an appropriate action and that there are no objections before I do. Thoughts?Kerdooskis (talk) 20:32, 3 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Might be better to petition for the article to be deleted, WP:HOWTODELETE. --Zefr (talk) 20:46, 3 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'm OK with edits to switch to past tense. I made one edit to the first line of the lead just now, but the rest of that section could use some additional tweaking as the flow/wording is a bit rough. Rhode Island Red (talk) 22:58, 3 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'm good with that. Regarding Zefr's idea, it's obvious this article is not on many editors' radars, but it is nonetheless notable enough to remain an article. What would be the justification for deleting it other than to hide the truth about a controversial company/topic (MLM schemes that have been shut down)? Per WP:DELETE, I think the article should be edited for improvement.Kerdooskis (talk) 17:12, 4 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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