Template:Did you know nominations/Selim Sesler
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The result was: promoted by Rcsprinter123 (deliver) @ 15:47, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
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Selim Sesler[edit]
- ... that Turkish-Romani musician Selim Sesler (1957–2014) is called "the Coltrane of the clarinet"?
- Reviewed: City Church, Preston
Created by CeeGee (talk). Self nominated at 18:05, 14 May 2014 (UTC).
A couple of things need fixing. After that it will be good to go.
- *The hook is interesting (possibly doesn't need the dates) and cited; article new and long enough.
- *Footnote #14 needs to have its formatting improved.
Done - *There are two spelling mistakes in Footnote #2 ("Selin" and "clarinat") Done
- *I made some copy edits to improve clarity. For example, I altered "a quality of vivid archive" which was not clear. Hope the new versions give the meaning you intended. It's OK.
Whiteghost.ink (talk) 01:42, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot for your attention and review. --CeeGee 02:20, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
- You're welcome.
Good to go now. Whiteghost.ink (talk) 02:53, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
- You're welcome.
- Thanks a lot for your attention and review. --CeeGee 02:20, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
