Template:Did you know nominations/Turn Me Out
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 03:21, 29 December 2013 (UTC)
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Turn Me Out[edit]
- ... that "Turn Me Out" is a 1997 song by Praxis featuring Kathy Brown?
- Comment: All the sources which mention the original - i.e. as a sample for the 2 Shoes and Russ Chimes versions - attribute the song to Brown only, which would lead me to believe that that is common knowledge. Also, the section about the 2 Shoes version is directly copied from User:Launchballer/Shoes (see this exchange on Peridon's talk page).
5x expanded by Launchballer (talk). Self nominated at 10:08, 23 November 2013 (UTC).
- The song was released in 1994. I added details, so you can help me copyedit it. George Ho (talk) 02:46, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that "Turn Me Out" was recorded in 1994 and 1997 by the band Praxis featuring Kathy Brown?
- ALT2: ... that the song "Turn Me Out", first recorded in 1994 by Praxis featuring Kathy Brown, was covered in 2012 by the duo 2 Shoes and then in 2013 by Russ Chimes?
- I added two more hooks. You can amend the original hook. George Ho (talk) 02:56, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that the 1994 and 1997 Praxis featuring Kathy Brown song "Turn Me Out" has been covered by 2 Shoes and Russ Chimes?
--Launchballer 10:52, 2 December 2013 (UTC)
Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:04, 19 December 2013 (UTC)
The following has been checked in this review by Matty.007
- QPQ needed
- Article 5* expanded by Launchballer on 19 November 2013, from 130 characters to 1852
- Please source the statement about it being a debut album
- I have. See Turn Me Out#Background.--Launchballer 09:47, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
- Earwig @ Toolserver found no copyvios
- Hook is a bit jerky, but facts are sourced. Perhaps a minor re-wording?
- Right, it was originally released in 1994. So I'll remove the 'and 1997' bit from ALT3.
- ALT4: ... that the 1994 Praxis featuring Kathy Brown song "Turn Me Out" has been covered by 2 Shoes and Russ Chimes?--Launchballer 09:47, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
- Still slightly odd. How about Alt 5: that the 1994 Praxis song featuring Kathy Brown, "Turn Me Out", has been covered by 2 Shoes and Russ Chimes?. Thanks, Matty.007 10:09, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
- How is ALT4 odd? The song is by "Praxis featuring Kathy Brown".--Launchballer 17:33, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
- It just strikes me as a little... breathless? I find it awkward, but if others think it's OK... Thanks, Matty.007 17:35, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
- How about
ALT6: ... that Turn Me Out, originally by Praxis featuring Kathy Brown, has been covered by 2 Shoes and Russ Chimes?--Launchballer 17:38, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
- How about
- It just strikes me as a little... breathless? I find it awkward, but if others think it's OK... Thanks, Matty.007 17:35, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
- How is ALT4 odd? The song is by "Praxis featuring Kathy Brown".--Launchballer 17:33, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
- Still slightly odd. How about Alt 5: that the 1994 Praxis song featuring Kathy Brown, "Turn Me Out", has been covered by 2 Shoes and Russ Chimes?. Thanks, Matty.007 10:09, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
