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Your submission at Articles for creation: Donald J Fernbach (May 9)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Iwaqarhashmi were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Waqar💬 07:44, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Can you give an example of a sentence that is not written in formal tone?

All of the newspaper and magazine articles have been archived. Would box numbers at the archival office satisfy your needs? They are not online.online. 2601:603:4E80:37F0:645F:64E6:8ABF:7C75 (talk) 21:01, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, A!ex1s J0yce! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Waqar💬 07:44, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]