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Your submission at Articles for creation: Moira Ness (October 15)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hoary was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

How does she meet WP:ARTIST, or, if not WP:ARTIST then WP:PERSON more generally? Additionally, much of what's said in this draft is attributed to interviews and thus to Ness herself. The article should primarily depend on sources independent of her.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Hoary (talk) 08:02, 15 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Friendslayer! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Hoary (talk) 08:02, 15 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Article creation[edit]

Hello Friendslayer! I saw your recent article was declined. I think I can help rewrite it in a way that will get it passed through AfC as the artist and their work has been the focus of several media articles. While technically it's Wikipedia and I don't need to ask permission I feel that since you got it started I don't want to just go in and start making a bunch of edits. Let me know if you're still working on it or want to work on it together. Take care TheMusicExperimental (talk) 21:06, 23 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Friendslayer, I put a stub in place on the Talk page and we can continue to discuss the content of the page there. I think with a little bit of re-write and framing we can establish the notability of the subject based references to the two interviews, Toronto Art Fair, and the Photo magazine. From there it's mostly cleaning up the language to be more neutral in tone. Reviewers often spike new articles for sounding too promotional. Which isn't to say that anything needs to be negative, just that it can't be too positive either, just descriptive. TheMusicExperimental (talk) 18:34, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Moira Ness[edit]

Hello, Friendslayer. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Moira Ness, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 09:01, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Moira Ness[edit]

Hello, Friendslayer. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Moira Ness".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Iflaq ^(talk) 08:12, 15 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Moira Ness (February 12)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MurielMary was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Moira Ness and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Moira Ness, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

MurielMary (talk) 02:54, 12 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Moira Ness[edit]

Hello, Friendslayer. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Moira Ness".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 02:54, 12 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]